I agree with Dan Kozub, this is a good picture.
About the light, the reflections are typical for the MT-24EX on shiny subjects. I would suggest to diffuse or bounce the flashes, to make a bigger light source.

Thank you for the nice words, and sorry for the (very) late reply.
Ariel: the fly was mounted on a mono-rail/focus-rail.
Fred: I used a light tent (White paper), and a MT-24EX.

Thanks for a great program, that I have just started using. This is one of my first images made with HeliconFocus. Some cleaning up in Photoshop. Ca. 35 exposures in this crop.

Canon 350D, MP-E 65 mm.